Something else to work at before I even get the main plot all lined up. Of course, something to pitch.

People say this should be one line that you could essentially tell someone in an elevator. A short snappy hook to get people interested.

I think I went through a hundred iterations before I got to this one.

The Bright Lord – work in progress – Logline

To save his family, a retired Bright Lord must rejoin the trainee ranks and reclaim the title that was once his.